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A poetic story that invites the reader to create the structure, July 30, 2023
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This game/story/poem was written for the Neo Twiny Jam in 500 words or less.

It's all on one page with expandable text. I read it at first, seeing in it obtuse musings on relationship.

Then I read the trigger warnings, which gave me insights into themes I hadn't identified. Then I realized the poem has a different structure that first appears, a sort of meta puzzle.

I ended up liking piecing things together, having to reach for what's going on. Very nice. Vivid imagery.

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