This is one great game. It's fun, it's simple, it's disturbing. Honestly, this game is the one you should play if you are a beginner in IF. Never before I could complete a game without looking at a walkthrough, but somehow, I managed to finish this game with no problem at all for the first time. Storyline is pretty good and puzzles are easily done, provided you explore a little. Recommended.
I was curious when I started the game. Twine Story? What did it mean? So I started to enter the game and found myself laughing in the end.
This game explains on how it is like to write an IF game using Twine, which I have to admit, is exactly what I would feel like if I were to do so.
The story isn't written too badly, and can be easily understood. But 1 issue I had on the game was the horrible blue background of the game. It made my eyes hurt and took my eyes a while to get used to the world after playing it. Avoid playing if your eyes aren't so good.
If anything, this is a short game. Perhaps if you are feeling bored and just want to throw some time away, try this. You can probably finish it in 10 minutes. Or more as it goes on forever. 3/5 stars