It was a bit too linear for my tastes, more of a short story than a game, but was fairly well-written. The game could be improved by being able to respond to some of the other ads, or otherwise make decisions that actually matter.
It is a quite short, fairly linear, and the story was just fairly random. The final page was rather amusing, though. I personally tend to go for longer and less linear twine games.
Best part of the story:
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