Reviews by Nathaniel

Extremely well done erotic scenes, with a variety of light-hearted humor thrown in throughout the novel.

It was fairly well-written, and fairly interesting. That said, I tend to prefer less linear twine games.

It was a bit too linear for my tastes, more of a short story than a game, but was fairly well-written. The game could be improved by being able to respond to some of the other ads, or otherwise make decisions that actually matter.

It is a quite short, fairly linear, and the story was just fairly random. The final page was rather amusing, though. I personally tend to go for longer and less linear twine games.

Best part of the story:
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The writing style leaves a bit to be desired, its too terse and leaves much unexplained. The pictures do help with that considerably, but I still feel like the game badly needs more descriptions. In particular, attack descriptions are badly needed.

It was a bit on the short side, and ended quite abruptly, and seemed quite linear, making it more a short story than a game. That said, the writing was decent and amusing. Seems like the decent start to a game, but could use much more content and a couple different story branches.

It was quite well-written and amusing, with a fair bit of replayability. I was laughing through a good section of it. It is one of my favorite text games thus far.

It was overall a quite fun game, neat to see how the various civilizations evolve, and interesting strategies behind it. It took me about a half an hour to get a successful civilization, the eighteenth or so one did it. Often the civilizations will be wiped out by things beyond your control, whereas at other times you have to balance between a variety of risks.