Ratings and Reviews by Perforation

I don't see the point of this, as Ogre pointed out.

Even if the author were to be collecting data(which this is the wrong site for), there's nothing to be collected.

The author really needs a read up on interactive fiction, because for goodness sake these are disgusting.

Story: None. Need I say more?

Effort: It hurts me to say this, but there's a degree of effort. The author at least had the ability to write out these text boxes, make words appear on the screen.

All in all, don't read(?).

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Sickness, by Stephen Lavelle

3 of 3 people found the following review helpful:

Something,, January 18, 2021

This time, the author actually wrote more words, it changes nothing, though.

Story: You are sick. you make appointments with doctors to cure said sickness, while boring enough, the author decided to make the game repetitive as heck. The practically same pages blipped past one by one, name changing was the only thing that was different. Basically caused me to lose focus 10% of the way through.

Effort: More than the others, I'll give him that. There were innumerable grammar mistakes, no attempt at spicying up the plot and dragging readers in.

Honestly, makes me wonder how old the author actually is.

Conclusion: Don't play it. It has about as much plot as the other games made by him, and eternally more boring.

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Detective Clean, by Stephen Lavelle

2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:

An.... Attempt?, January 18, 2021

Similar to the other pieces of "interactive fiction" created by this author, it holds barely anything.

Story: A basic, disgusting attempt at humor, with a bland story(?). It had nothing unique, the same pages going on and on.

Effort: Minimal. The average words per page is probably somewhere in the 10-20 range.

Conclusion, like the rest of the "works" by this author, avoid.

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Place and Time, by Stephen Lavelle

3 of 3 people found the following review helpful:

No point, January 18, 2021

So. There are 4-ish rooms with the same 4 choices.

No story, no puzzle, not even an attempt to be "philosophical". I could make this in 10 minutes.

There's nothing to talk about, since there's no content in the story. All in all, avoid.

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