correspondence

by gummyghosting

2023

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A linear story with some strong twists, July 27, 2023
by MathBrush
Related reviews: less than 15 minutes

This game, written for the Neo Twiny Jam in 500 words or less, takes a twist on multiple meanings of the word 'correspondence'.

Rather than using the word limit to ration small paragraphs into multiple branches, it unloads it all in one linear story.

There's a nice twist halfway through, which is executed well. But a lot of the phrasing in the letter felt very vague to me. I realize that they may have helped the twist, but I'm not sure. Overall had some strong moments.

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