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(limited time offer)

by jay cee

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About the Story

you are theo guelas. you are tipsy and you are dying, albeit very slowly. you live on a small sad planet somewhere far far away, with an atmosphere toxic to humans. but hey, that's why they built the dome, or something. you are also outside the door of your doctor/friend/crush. contemplate your toxic relationship with a manipulative popstar named victory (but not too hard!) and tell your doctor/friend/crush about your impending doom.

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Short Snippet, June 23, 2024
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(limited time offer) is a short Twine piece set on a faraway planet where you play as Theo, a drunk and dying woman, in front of Lisa’s door, your physician/crush, about to tell her the truth. Realising you have little time left, you take a leap of faith and blurt it all out. It is a short scene, muddled with many feelings, messy circumstances and inebriation. The choice given was a bit funny, with that second of clarity through the vapours of alcohol. I wished it had been longer. 500 words feels too short…

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