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Potentially powerful, not perfectly implemented, January 16, 2017*
by IFforL2 (Chiayi, Taiwan)

This story explores the PC's thoughts and memories, rather than geography. Compared to other IFs of the same concept (e.g. verityvirtue's Staying Put), this is relatively under-implemented, which kept me mindful of the parser. (Spoiler - click to show)For an example, talk to Claire.The author clearly didn't want the reader to go in that direction, but a more natural response would have helped me stay immersed.

* This review was last edited on January 17, 2017
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