TOITŪ

This is a work made as part of a PhD project. Some college project IF games are real stinkers, while others (like Blue Lacuna) can be impressive. This one is complex and literary, and should, I believe, serve well as a PhD-level material.

I do have some complaining to do to contrast with later praising. When I saw '2 hours' and the term 'detective poem', then tried the opening page and saw the text was being slowly typed out, I was possessed with terror and flashbacks of other poetic games like Succor that used slow text for hours at a time. I even started downloading the code and opening it up to remove the timed text, when I saw it wasn't that much. Reader, I pushed onwards.

The first scene was difficult to parse, I kind of wandering through nature and establishing your physical identity. I thought at first that nothing was being tracked, but quite a bit was, and there were callbacks later on. I genuinely didn't understand much of the intro, except that there was water there.

Then we break into a more story-focused segment that was cool. You are in New Zealand in Dunedin and have to climb up a street with a map and clear out several drains to help a plumber/concrete company owner. Everything is mystical, and at first I wasn't sure if it was realism, ADHD causing us to over-fixate on every detail, or that our character was under the influence of perception-enhancing/changing drugs, but after playing later parts I think it was more magical realism. We do find a talking animal or two.
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Once I had unclogged everything, in the evening light, I felt very satisfied with the game, which had felt lengthy. To my surprise, I saw 'End of Part 1', and was troubled. Wasn't this a good place to end the game already?

But the next part was interesting in a different way. Like @alyshkalia's Blossom, NY, this part of the twine game features real landmarks from a city (in this case, Dunedin) and gives info on them, but combines it with story. This part of the game has you exploring an underground tunnel in the city with a strange mechanical contraption equipped with periscope and walkie talkie. By rolling up and down the tunnel, you encounter different things (like a urinal that knows your name) and objects that you can acquire and use elsewhere. Meanwhile, you encounter the plumber more and more. Eventually, you can leave the tunnel and explore more of the places you passed. This final segment was bewildering with its number of possible choices but I believe it was actually funneling you all along, as I made it to an ending safely.

The best character in the game is the river Toitū itself, which is extremely prominent in all 3 parts, serving as a linear organizer of locations and as a source of refreshment and even holy water at one point.

Overall, I found the grate-unplugging to be the strongest portion, but the overall effect was good. I tend to be less open to poetic works, and have found that my reaction to such things as the games of B-Minus or furkle/mother or the poetry game Portrait with Wolf tend to be less enthusiastic than those games deserve, and the same is likely true here; others may find the first opening area to be more enlightening than it was to me.

Finally, I loved the hand-drawn maps, very cool.

PS Oh, I forgot to mention! The game also contains a dozen or mor images of pages from the works of Janet Frame, a NZ poet who was saved from lobotomy by winning an award for her works. This game shows an alternate history.