First Draft of the Revolution

what an EXCELLENT game! although i use the word game loosely - the limited interactivity and single ending here makes it feel more like a novel than anything, the fun editing mechanic and engrossing story more than make up for it. as always, emily short uses innovative mechanics to enrich and enliven the story she wants to tell, and the results are impeccable. i really enjoyed how each line you edited was not just there to give you a sense of changing things up, but to further develop the characters and the world they live in. just so smart and well done. emily short's writing is always a treat to read :)