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An amusing linear story riffing on familiar internet tropes, December 19, 2013
by streever (America)

This is an amusing comedic work which riffs on familiar ground.

The humor is dry and understated--not laugh out loud funny, but amusing & wry.

There is only ever one choice--one real choice at least--and regardless of when you make it (or fail to make it) the story works. I can't say too much about the actual comedy or the nature of the joke, because it would spoil the experience of playing this game.

I would urge the author to format the text differently; it is hard to read, and could really use basic typographic improvements. Line height increase, size increase, and a better, more easily-read typeface would make this a much stronger piece. In general I think Twine authors should put a little more work into the presentation of their text; it is easy and generates a huge improvement with only a few minutes of even basic, default formatting.

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