The writing is good: I'm not typically one to sit through a game with large amounts of text, but the presentation and writing on this game were both very well done.
The story centers on a 12 year old detective investigating a murder, and makes clear nods to how ridiculous the premise is.
The writing is funny and engaging.
This CYOA is low on choice--like many classic CYOAs, it seems to have one outcome. The lack of choice didn't hamper this entry, however--it was still engaging and enjoyable.
I appreciated the formatting of the page--in general, I think the better CYOAs lay out the page in a way that makes it easier to read than the default layouts.