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An exchange of names...or not?, July 18, 2023This entry in the Neo Twiny Jam, written in 500 words or less, concerns an encounter with a mysterious spidery being in the forest.
This is a fae-like tale, which a creature asking for your name whose motives may not be everything you think they are...
This is honestly a pretty good setup and mostly good execution, but the limitations of the wordcount bind this story and it ends long before the narrative energy has been expended. A less weighty tale or longer matter might make this stronger.
- Edo, July 7, 2023
- Cerfeuil (*Teleports Behind You* Nothing Personnel, Kid), July 3, 2023
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