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by Hanon Ondricek (United States)
This was done as a challenge to create a story with 23 passages in Twine. The writing is clear, evocative, and sure.
Other than the brief length, the limitations seem to pose no problem for the author, although I did find myself looping to the same passages several times. This doesn't hurt, because there are extra links to investigate each time.
23 screens doesn't seem like much, but the author intelligently structures this so it doesn't feel like a small story. Very well done.
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