The text-to-choices ratio is not high, but your choices seem to make a difference. As a player, I was immersed in the game and felt good when my character was able to achieve a good result in the game world.
There were a couple of typos in the text, but I couldn't contact the author directly because I would have needed an itch.io account.
Play time for me was about 20 minutes, making this game on the short side, but I think it's a good length for this format.