Beautiful. I am dead serious this is one of the most excellent uses of the medium and excellent play on tradition. The way everything is implemented is just clever to me. And i love the poetic writing in the beginning and then the funny stuff afterward.
Doesn’t matter how long it is. Why do the other reviewers care about that? Do these people hate short stories for being short? Or poems for only being one verse? Because overall that’s what this is. Why does the “game” part come first to most people??
Anyway, i wish more stuff like this existed. Only issue i have is that Jumpman was a carpenter not a plumber lol.