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Twenty four

by Cyrus Firheir

(based on 2 ratings)
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About the Story

Disclaimer: Twenty four is a work of fiction.

Twenty four is a lighthearted poem from the perspective of a guy who's recently started an independent adult life.

An entry for the Neo-Twiny Jam 2025.

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Number of Reviews Written by IFDB Members: 2
Quiet Celebration of a New Year, July 10, 2025
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Twenty four is an interactive poem about turning twenty-four, a sequel of some sort of The Day I Turned 22. Struggling to wake up, getting through the motions of the day, reminiscing on simpler days and realising how far you've come... minutes tick away and whoop the day is gone - you're now twenty four. Here's to the one year passed, here's to twenty-four future ones!
Twenty-four clicks for twenty-four years... AND EVERY STANZA RHYMES~!

There's something quite relatable about the day before your birthday being pretty mundane, with little fanfare. Going through the motions of the day, like a cog in a machine, without feeling much anticipation for what is to come. An almost indifference towards the celebration, changing little in your life compared to other milestones (like getting a job, being respected and needed, etc...). Not feeling much different than the days before.

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Adulting, July 7, 2025

Twenty four is basically a poem, built into a linear IF. Well, what you mostly do is tap the single choice and let the next line appear, until the entire poem is out.

The poem was still pretty amusing, poking fun at some of the more negative parts of being an adult. It was (thankfully) not too relatable to me, since I don't really mind doing the dishes promptly, but yeah, still a fun read.

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Game Details

Language: English (en)
First Publication Date: June 28, 2025
Current Version: Unknown
License: Freeware
Development System: Twine
IFID: 65885180-45E2-49B6-AE30-FF4F288F5B3C
TUID: qogpyrhbnglh3enq

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