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About the Story
"It's a dark world out there, Aspen. Be ready for the worst and then some" her mother said to her before dusting off the little girls cap. "Alright mommy, bye-bye" Aspen grinned a toothless grin, before walking to her fellow kindergarteners.
Years went by, and finally Aspen has gotten to realize what she meant.
A nice short story with a disturbing ending. The writing is sufficient, the concept promising. The ending comes a bit too abrupt and made me wonder if it was meant to be the regular ending, also regarding the fact that there is a broken link some pages before, so I got the feeling that I had missed something. I encourage the author to revise the code and fix the bug, and maybe to continue this story, as it has some potential.