There's not a lot to this game as yet. I think it would have been a decent entry into IntroComp.
You click around, escape your bedroom, meet a mysterious NPC, and… that's the end of part 1, five minutes later.
Still, the dystopian setting is decently depicted. If this were an IntroComp entry, I would have voted for it to win. As an IFComp entry, well, there's just not enough here to get excited about.