Nose Bleed

by Stanley W. Baxton profile

Surreal
2022

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Writhe like a worm on a hook, October 11, 2022

Nose Bleed by Stanley W. Baxton

This one made me squirm. It is short and economical, but still descriptive enough to tap into a fear that nightmares are made of. It uses some clever effects to enhance the repulsion, but the writing is what makes this entry so transporting. Except–who can I recommend it to? Considering that most of us who enjoy text adventures are able to place ourself in the game so effectively, what would motivate someone to want to go through this???

(Spoiler - click to show)As someone who gets stains on their clothes at work on a regular basis, I connected very closely with the anxiety of a highly noticeable mess turning everyone’s attention towards you. I also relate to the feeling that everything you try to do to cover it up and move on just makes it worse.

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Stanwixbuster, October 11, 2022 - Reply
oh lord thank you

the more reviews i'm reading for this the more i'm realising my metric for what i consider mildly disturbing is a little off
Tito Valenz, October 13, 2022 - Reply
It was a very effective piece.
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