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A balled up piece of paper, found lying on the pavement. There's writing inside. Who was it to? Why was it here? What does it say?
A piece of interactive flash fiction, using the cycling-link feature of Twine. Created for Neo-Twiny Jam 2025.
Play in full-screen recommended.
Word count: 434 words
Bird image in title credit:
Great-tailed Grackle by Charles J. Sharp - Own work, from Sharp Photography, sharpphotography.co.uk, CC BY-SA 4.0, https://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php?curid=130225277
Entrant - Neo-Twiny Jam 2025
| Average Rating: Number of Reviews Written by IFDB Members: 1 |
A Crumpled Piece of Paper is an interactive epistolary game, where you find a balled up piece of paper on the pavement. Curious about its content, you open it. It's a letter written to an ex. Reminiscing on the past. Talking about the present. But it's also a lot more.
The game calls itself flash fiction, using cycling interactive elements to display different sides of the story. It starts off pretty normal and mundane, exploring the messy feelings of break ups. Soon, though, as you interact with the sentences, so does the tone. It's a bit bizarre, quite sad, then turns to chilling, to down right horror-y!
You'd think the shift of tone would be bizarre, but it's incredibly well done here. Fed drip by drip, you don't realise until it's too late what has happened here. There's a bit of a back and forth with a few sections at the end, almost re-writing what was there before.
But I think the most interesting thing about the interactivity here, is the tiny "combination puzzles". At a couple key points, you have multiple active cycling elements, blocking the rest of the story until you match the correct words. In the context of when the letter was written in-game, it really puts emphasis on how the choice of words are important, how they all have different meanings and weights, how appropriate they are in specific situations.
This was really really good!
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