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A brief story written as a conversation, July 18, 2023This is a story about a celebrity encounter, written in the Neo Twiny Jam in under 500 words.
In it, you play as a participant in a conversation with a friend who just met a celebrity that knew them in a store and was given an expensive, fancy present.
The main appeal here (to me) is the friend dynamic, the combination of disinterest, jealousy, and support shown by the main character.
There is a feature that crosses off links if they go to a page you've been before (I thought it was just if you've clicked on the link before, but Manon pointed out it's for if you visited a page before). This is a bit weird for the final choice, but otherwise works well. Nice work overall.