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pavement & rain

by Marina Yesari

2024
Twine
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1 review — 2 members have played this game.

About the Story

Made for the Neo-Twiney Game Jam 2024, a short conversation between a doctor and a failed nurse.

This game includes discussion of death and policing, but not in any detail. It does not discuss police brutality and takes place in a wholly fictional setting.

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Write a review Bitter (unsaid) words, June 9, 2024
by manonamora
Related reviews: neotwinyjam

pavement & rain is a short Twine conversation between a doctor and a failed nurse following the death of a young girl. Between the voiced words and the retrospection, the prose tell us with little words about the bleak setting, the current situation of the characters and their relationship. Yet, it leaves us with even more questions.

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Game Details

Language: English (en)
First Publication Date: June 5, 2024
Current Version: Unknown
License: Freeware
Development System: Twine
 IFID: Unknown
TUID: latjkmfesu7p7hwx

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