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ChatGPTerror, November 6, 2025
by Mike Russo (Los Angeles)
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Probably the most interesting thing about the rise of LLMs (a low bar) is that it’s given us a new AI story. When I was growing up, there were just two: Pinocchio, and 2001. That is, either the story was going to be about whether or not an artificial consciousness could be “real” (so Data from Star Trek, Richard Powers’ Galatea 2.2, Spielberg’s Kubrick’s A.I.), or about whether the robots were going to destroy their creators (Terminator, The Matrix… heck, this trope goes all the way back to R.U.R.) But now there’s a third story, reflecting the anxieties brought on by generative AI: maybe the machines won’t live alongside us, or violently overthrow us, but instead simply supplant us, doing all the work and making all our decisions until we’re superfluous.

One Step Ahead’s implementation isn’t especially impressive – presentation-wise, this is bare-bones Harlowe, and the writing is marred by plenty of typos and infelicities – but when it sticks to telling this new story, it managed to sustain my attention as the protagonist, worn down by the demands of classwork and decision fatigue, slowly cedes more and more of their agency to an LLM. Soon it’s doing their homework, deciding on their meal plans, and shouldering them out of their life. There’s not much characterization or specificity, and the use of interactivity is rather blunt (you can either give into temptation and use the AI – or you can choose not to, which swiftly ends the game without anything by way of denouement), but hey, who doesn’t want to see Faust get his comeuppance?

The trouble is, in the third act of its short runtime, the game swerves back into one of the old narratives, specifically the oh-no-AI-will-kill-us-all one. You have a moment of clarity and try to delete or at least step back from using it, before it’s inevitably reinstalled and punishes you for your disobedience. Narratively, this isn’t especially convincing – the details on how all this is happening are vague, beyond red angry-text being displayed at odd angles. And thematically, it’s a muddle: what’s terrifying about being replaced by an LLM is specifically that it doesn’t have any agency, we’re just making ourselves obsolete through sheer lack of character, or having it imposed on us from above by rapacious bosses. Killer robots reflect a capitalist’s guilty conscience at the oppression of the proletariat, so bringing this note into the mix adds nothing but discordance – it’s a plot twist for the sake of a plot twist, an escalation for the sake of an escalation. And since, unfortunately, there’s not much here beyond the very basic skeleton of a narrative, when that goes off the rails there’s similarly not much left for One Step Ahead to fall back on.

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