the happiness jar

This poem was written in 500 words or less for the Neo Twiny Jam.

It's written with a neat interactive structure with little triangle to expand or shrink the text, all nested within each other. Inside the nesting are some other types of links that manipulate the text in various ways.

The poem is a nostalgic one, talking about memories with a friend that have a different shade of emotion looking back.

Overall, it's well executed.

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