A Triangle for Two

Triangle for Two

I was surprised to see this one unreviewed so far, since Naarel tends to have strong prose and games that are easy to finish, which usually means lots of IFComp reviews. I suspect that it comes from not having the game length field filled out (I'd put it in the 15 minutes or less category, though I took longer as I thought through it and reread chunks). Also, it ends without THE END or something similar at the end, so people may think they didn't finish it. I'm not as familiar with the co-author, though I suspect the text itself may elucidate that matter.

This is a short, polished twine game with literary text that deals with a social/personal facet of life. That's a fairly large field, but this reminds me more of Ann Hugo and Glassrat than any other authors (I enjoyed both of their games a lot).

The main topic of this game is that someone who has two people in the same body has to announce their mutual coexistence to a friend. This is complicated by the several differences in the two's personality. One sees the friend as a close friend, possibly even more. The other is hesitant, protective, tense.

There are three kinds of links: progressing links, 'aside' links that go to another passage and return, and replacement links. One page uses a lot of replacement links in a clever way.

It was interesting to read in the literal sense (by that I mean I wanted to know more and went back and forth and read it a few times to gather more information). I have family members with similar situations; my brother's wife has several alters (using her language here rather than the game's) including one that likes group video games when we do voice calls together.

What strikes me about the character in this story is the combination of '>1 people in =1 body' with body dysmorphia. The woman in the pair sees the male body as 'other'. I was also struck by the lack of other people; the few people I've met in life with similar situations typically have several different alters, some steering in groups. Having exactly two, one man and a woman, makes for a really compelling relationship, well, 'triangle', with others, as the name of the game reveals.

The writing was good as always, with multiple references to places and things in Poland.