lark-mirror

This is a poem written for the Neo Twiny Jam in 500 words or less.

It's styled nicely, with a nonstandard font and a red and black theme.

The structure involves going back and forth between one major poem that slowly grows and smaller poems on the side.

There's some vague imagery of pain and slurs towards women. It's meant in service to overall narrative, but I wonder if the same point could have been achieved in a different way.

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