Murder In Great Falls

Delron Review Compilation
I found this adventure had plenty of ideas but the implementation was flat and lifeless. The introduction was clumsy and hardly inspiring. I didn't feel like a cop from the word go and I never felt there was any urgency to solve the murder of Donald Wisker. The opening scenes of a game (or book or movie or anything, really, including conversation) are so vital. You need a decent hook. I can always understand the comment "well, it started very good but then lost its way afterwards". This is so true when an author has poured every last sweat and tear into snagging the player or reader with a top quality opening but simply cannot maintain the pace throughout. Murder In Great Falls doesn't even have a good opening so how does the rest fare?
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