This was... well done, I guess. But very much not my kind of story. Maybe fans of Cormac McCarthy's The Road would like it?
Every element of the storygame was just so... unpleasant that near the end I almost stopped because the unrelenting unlikability of the point of view I embodied was forcing me to disengage. I'm not sure there was much payoff either.
Still, it was well put together, and I'm sure people who like that kind of thing will enjoy it.