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3 of 3 people found the following review helpful:Extended in-joke with good intentions, May 18, 2015
by Andrew Watt (Los Angeles, California)
If you don't frequent the Twine forums, there's not much for you here. The story is just a collection of noir tropes, although the writing is occasionally witty. The game references some of Twine's most beloved advice-givers, including Sharpe, GreyElf, and MadExile (for whom a cocktail is named). Twine creator Chris Klimas also appears as, um, a stripper. And there's a cruel joke about SugarCane at which I confess to having laughed out loud.
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Sage, May 18, 2015 - ReplyPrevious | << 1 >> | Next
I took your SPECTACULAR advice! and I only had to change one sentence. Just so you don't have to replay it... it says "Her life's a glorious trainwreck."
Still at a thousand words! And that's including the code and a few different endings.
Thank you again for the advice. The only reason I left it off originally was that Harlowe itself was in there... but still... Your idea was better than mine.... so I went with it.
(and thanks for playing the game at all and rating it.)