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Short game inspired by an old story, September 28, 2025
Related reviews: less than 15 minutes

This is a small Inform game that seems unfinished in some sense. It has a small map with one central area and four spokes. Travelling in each of the spoke directions tells you of a memory, except for one which seems to be your current life.

It seems like it might be setting up something interesting (polishing the fruit was fun, as was wondering why we're wearing a night gown, and decompiling led me to try to BREAK OPEN the fruit), but it doesn't pay off, instead ending abruptly. If it's meant to be short and poetic, it might benefit from more careful attention to detail; if it's meant to be part of something longer, I'd love to see it finished.

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