The Turnip

by Joseph Pentangelo

Fantasy
2020

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Very weird, short and linear, October 2, 2020
by RadioactiveCrow (Irving, TX)
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I didn't care for this piece much. As the author notes, it is a short story he wrote some time ago turned into a very linear Twine piece, where the only interactivity is clicking on a few words to get some extra details. There are no branches in the narrative and there is only one ending. On top of that the story is really weird, like Upstream Color weird, and I didn't get it. Sorry.

It was clean execution though, and I appreciated the author's "About" page at the end.