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Branching elf hero quest, May 16, 2023This is a Twine piece with branching narratives where you are a legendary elf hero, tasked with saving a kingdom.
The writing is amusing, and I replayed quite a lot to see different endings. I never got a successful outcome one. However I ran into a bug. After (Spoiler - click to show)facing the ogre single handed I got a mostly blank screen, just the red background, then two horizontal lines. The game had totally seized up.
I was also frustrated that at least in my Safari on my Mac I never saw the stats (e.g. HP, EXP etc.) on screen again after the opening. Given I was doing things to affect them I really really wanted to see them! That may just be me though.
But it was an amusing fantasy piece. Nicely short too. I’d just like to see it polished a bit more.