Fallen 落葉 Leaves

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About the Story

An interactive ghazal-sonnet on love and longing, fire and passion.

Page Update History

	v.6: 23-Feb-2025 01:37 - JTN (Current Version) - Edit Page - Normal View Changed IFIDs, download links
	v.5: 22-Nov-2016 12:37 - verityvirtue Changed download links
	v.4: 18-Nov-2016 20:30 - CMG Changed external review links
	v.3: 16-Oct-2016 15:55 - CMG Changed publication date
	v.2: 15-Oct-2016 23:06 - CMG Changed author
	v.1: 01-Oct-2016 17:54 - verityvirtue Created page

1 Off-Site Review

The Breakfast Review
Well, it looks like we're making a poem. We choose a combination of verb and adverb, and then a sonnet appears; our choice of action occurs in the final couplet, and the rest of the sonnet ... the rest of the sonnet makes no sense whatsoever. Are we supposed to hammer at this until it does make sense, or at least sufficient sense that we're satisfied? If so, I can see no way to get there, aside from randomly guessing at combinations of verbs and adverbs.
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Game Details

Language: English (en)
First Publication Date: October 1, 2016
Current Version: Unknown
Development System: Twine

IFWiki: Fallen 落葉 Leaves

IFID: 22E395CE-AE55-482A-AF19-5BCA09697C6D
TUID: 4i2pxyk3xjlvkga5