Take Them Home

Anothe linear IF entry. You have a pleasant date and are now making the trip home. Always my favorite part of the date.

That said, the UI was an issue. You get a large picture in the background, with a tiny scrollable text box on it to read the text. Every time you continue with the story, the text isn't replaced, but the next line of text appears below, meaning you will need to do plenty of scrolling to read the next part. At the end of it all, I felt like I was reading the story through the slit of a medieval knight's helmet.

Anyway, with plenty of cookie cutter Twine UIs for the Neo Twiny Jam, bonus points for trying something different, even if it didn't entirely work out. It was a short and pleasant read too. Just bear in mind that the tiny text box could make things tricky.