Caroline

There is a lack of real interaction in this story. It's generally either A or B. And many times it's just 'type this to proceed' which doesn't make for a very interactive story.

In addition the characters are fairly two dimensional and everything just happens pretty quickly.

Despite all of this I was still very interested in the narrative and I wanted very much to play through to the conclusion, which is why it was so frustrating when my game stopped working at the line 'The sound of a deep bell reverberates through the building.'

Please test this a bit better next time so everyone can complete the game.