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A creative game with some implementation challenges, October 16, 2025
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This game had quite a few rough edges where it was clear the author was relatively unfamiliar with Inform and with parser games in general. Many key mechanics were implemented in decidedly nonstandard ways (ignoring features of Inform that might have made them smoother, and default commands that might conflict).

That being said, the game structure was interesting, and while the game uses a lot of elements from older, crueler games like mapping, limited moves, etc. (I presume many of these elements were topics of study in the class mentioned in the credits), none of them outstay their welcome. In fact, my favorite part of the game was the move-limited conversation tree in one of the paths. To my memory, it's the only conversation implementation I've ever seen that has actually managed to make me feel like I had to choose what topics to bring up carefully and really consider how they might specifically further my goals, without ever feeling betrayed if an option didn't quite go where I thought it would. The move limits curbed my natural impulse to lawnmower, while still leaving as many choices open to the player as possible, and being flexible enough to allow a couple tangents before returning to the main topic, which felt like a very natural way to hold a conversation. I was also very impressed that I was able to correctly figure out which conversation topics would lead to the correct outcome on my first try, without feeling like my hand was being held or they were being pointed out in any special way; the conversation felt logical and intuitive, which in my experience is extremely difficult to achieve and very uncommon to find.

I did find the plot and lore a little hard to follow in places. I think some of this was a pacing issue, especially going between combat and the lore/exposition paragraphs after combat. (A couple well-utilized "press space to continue" bits might have worked well there.) But overall I enjoyed the game and found the mechanics fun and interesting.

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Silverthorn, October 16, 2025 - Reply
Thanks so much for playing my game, and for leaving a nice review! It's true - I am new to Inform7 and not very familiar with the expectations audiences have for parser games. Submitting to IFComp gave me a lot of new, good information! Mostly that I would have had more fun making a limited parser/choice-based game at the end of the day, but that's besides the point...

I'm especially happy to hear that the conversation parts were, in aggregate, well-received. I really like writing dialogue, and so it's nice to know that I seem to be pretty good at it!

Regarding space-to-continue... I feel like I would have used it more in the same way I use those 'artistic line breaks' in prose. I just am not familiar enough with the medium to make those kinds of choices yet. Or, at least, I wasn't before making this game. Maybe I'll give it a try next time!

I also agree that the pacing/lore could be better. Next time I try something of this scope, I'm planning to add more optional lore/descriptive text for people who are interested. The experience here is, as some have noted, pretty streamlined. That's not always a good thing.

Thank you again for the review!
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