I made an account just to review this! Found it on ifarchive and I very much enjoy this work. It's hard to put into words; but this story spoke to me quite a bit, and I would recommend it any time of the day. The visuals were also quite striking, and easily make up for the lack of technical skill in them, because they convey the intended feelings quite well. It also plays quite well with contrast, flipping from pure white to pure black at-least once to portray the switch in emotions, which I enjoyed.
(Apologies if a lot of this was quite broad, I'm not too good at review.)