A Good Wick

There's some nice writing here, and the accompanying images are very nice and well drawn, but ultimately so distracting that they make the game annoying to play, rather than add to the atmosphere.

Every time you click a link you have to wait for an image to load, there's a constant flickering image in the background, and the links are dark and hard to find and take about two seconds to fully light up when hovered on.

I'd like to play a version of this with the visual effects toned down by at least half.