A Triangle for Two

This was not bad at all! I first want to highlight how interesting and clever the simple implementation of interactivity the author used to convey the inner struggles of the main protagonist(s?), which lives with something akin to borderline personality disorder, in real-time. Specifically, how some words are clickable and bring you to a page of dialogue occurring between Jan and Maria as they react to what is happening around them. Otherwise, it still remains a rather simplistic story, but I quite enjoyed this as a short story (in the sense of the literary genre). That being said, it's ending also left me wanting more and felt a bit sudden, so I do have certain issues with its pacing a little bit. To note, I felt slightly confused at times about who was talking between Maria and Jan, though I think that was kind of the author's intention, so that was neat!