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2 of 6 people found the following review helpful:No, No, No, Please No., May 16, 2011
by AmberShards (The Gothic South)
From the first paragraph, you know this game will be bad. Scary Caps, grammar problems, and point of view problems scream off the screen. The content? Well, it fits.
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Shoelip, May 15, 2011 - ReplyPrevious | << 1 >> | Next
I actually found the premise entertaining, even if the execution left a lot to be desired. But the death scene you're speaking of it actually a great example of the less than stellar bug squashing in this IF.
(Spoiler - click to show)Try various ways of avoiding Rachel's death, most of them fail due to not being accounted for by the developer.