(I wrote few paragraphs for something that could be said in 1-2 sentences but the point stands - ending is disappointing, the post-bite pre-transformation part is indeed nice)
Technically the story indeed matches the description of the story written on this page, however… it’s not really what I’ve expected/others could expect from playing it.
The buildup towards the transformation, (what i had assumed would be the starting point of the story) was done very well, choices weren’t overmade or lacking, decisions did indeed make sense and while I could complain about the pace being a bit too fast I think it was pretty enjoyable.
Unfortunately, I can’t say that for the post-transformation part, which… is basically just a singular page.
Turns out the part I thought that things would get interesting turned out to be the ending, and well…
I just can’t say that I just feel the most encyclopedic feeling of disappointment. While it technically states in the description
| “can you survive the coming ordeals with your sanity in tact?
Which… technically implies the story focuses on the pre-transformation part, I just don’t really think it’s what I would expect both from the story (as in unfinished side characters general speech of characters suggesting more during the post-transformation part) and the ifdb about snippet.
Nonetheless, for being a short story/snippet of something bigger, it’s good. Just note that the story is focused around the infection-period and not the actual post-turning-into-a-werewolf part