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 More Branches Than a Shrub, August 7, 2012by Joey Jones (UK) Related reviews: nodal narratives, scarcely warranted enthusiasm, early morning reviews, late night reviews, run on sentences Myriad steps towards the kind of branching story I always wanted to read: to hell with merging nodes, I want full bifurcation, 24/7; and Porpentine obviously also heard the sirens of unreasonable work-load calling and dove into the pools of unending possibilities and dragged out this strangle-weeded narrative, a pocket of infinities. The quality is high, mostly consistently so; for most of it I was thinking 'Yeah, this is pretty good, I can see what she's doing here, blah blah, blah,' but then I played the scorpion queen section, which borders on being a puzzle, and it was okay; BUT THEN, then afterwards the denouement hit me like the well crafted metaphor that it was and I felt compelled to give it a write up pronto-like. Was this review helpful to you? Yes No Remove vote | Add a comment
Comments on this reviewPrevious | << 1 >> | Next Joey Jones, August 7, 2012 - Reply Uh oh! Fixed now. The embarrassing thing was that I actually I scoured the review for gender references (gendered pronouns are a nuisance), but that one slipped through anyway. Yeah it was ace, keep writing! |