Cactus Blue Motel

by Astrid Dalmady profile

2016

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I was there, November 7, 2016
by streever (America)

This piece transported me to my own confused teenage years. Trying to sort out my future, scared of adulthood, pushed by forces beyond my control, I desperately could have used two close friends, a road trip, and a magical motel.

Strengths include fantastic writing throughout, a sense of place, strong characters, and a powerful voice from a talented writer.

Weaknesses: Where is my soundtrack? What is the url for the motel website? How can I visit here? Why isn't there more? Will you write more? Can I subscribe to your email list?

OK, so maybe those aren't actually 'weaknesses' in the commonly accepted meaning of the word, but come on, let me visit the Cactus Blue! :)

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dastridly, November 7, 2016 - Reply
Hi! Author here A) Thanks for the review and B) I don't normally respond to reviews, but I have some actually answers to two of your questions, so I figured I'd chime in. ^_^

- Where is my soundtrack?

I actually made two soundtracks for the game, one instrumental, and one with lyrics. I didn't embed them into the game for a variety of reasons, but they're still there for you to enjoy!

Instrumental: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLGBUAUfkqlkYMRfSCAdFDMXH31jopQghp
Lyrics: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLGBUAUfkqlkaSsIyM3R4bvvfMQ095oW5p

- Can I subscribe to your email list?

Of course! I only email when big stuff happens like new releases, so please enjoy. You can find the sign-up on my website: http://astriddalmady.com/
streever, November 14, 2016 - Reply
Hi Dastridly,
I am so glad I asked those questions! The two soundtracks are amazing, thank you, and I am happily subscribed to the updates. Looking forward to digging through your prior work & seeing the next thing!
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