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I was there, November 7, 2016This piece transported me to my own confused teenage years. Trying to sort out my future, scared of adulthood, pushed by forces beyond my control, I desperately could have used two close friends, a road trip, and a magical motel.
Strengths include fantastic writing throughout, a sense of place, strong characters, and a powerful voice from a talented writer.
Weaknesses: Where is my soundtrack? What is the url for the motel website? How can I visit here? Why isn't there more? Will you write more? Can I subscribe to your email list?
OK, so maybe those aren't actually 'weaknesses' in the commonly accepted meaning of the word, but come on, let me visit the Cactus Blue! :)
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Hi! Author here A) Thanks for the review and B) I don't normally respond to reviews, but I have some actually answers to two of your questions, so I figured I'd chime in. ^_^
- Where is my soundtrack?
I actually made two soundtracks for the game, one instrumental, and one with lyrics. I didn't embed them into the game for a variety of reasons, but they're still there for you to enjoy!
Instrumental: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLGBUAUfkqlkYMRfSCAdFDMXH31jopQghp
Lyrics: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLGBUAUfkqlkaSsIyM3R4bvvfMQ095oW5p
- Can I subscribe to your email list?
Of course! I only email when big stuff happens like new releases, so please enjoy. You can find the sign-up on my website: http://astriddalmady.com/
