The Daughter

Considering that this is effectively a pilot episode or introductory chapter, it's rather successful. The world is introduced with a lovely balance of clarity and obfuscation, blending the familiar with the unusual. There are quite a few spelling/grammar errors, but I didn't notice them distracting me too much from the storytelling. The mystery is seeded quite nicely, with some hints at larger machinations or strange happenings, perhaps. My ending suited me as well, though I understand that the game deliberately tries to pitch the intrigue at a level that matches your previous choices.