Autumn's Daughter

by Devolution Games

2013
Undum

Go to the game's main page

Review

2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
Protagonist has limited agency, November 21, 2013
by streever (America)

The game has a strong message, but was ultimately a bit frustrating--the narrative needs some tweaking and improvements to really convey the story and immerse us in the character.

I suspect that English may not be the authors first language, based on some of the typos and grammar issues I found, so I'd encourage the author to reach out to the IF community and get some help polishing the storyline.

An interesting game, from an interesting perspective, which is held back primarily by issues with the writing.

It is short, puzzle-less, and largely linear--while you have choices, they don't feel particularly fulfilling, largely because you're playing from the perspective of a character with very little agency and freedom in her life. A frustrating but worthwhile experience.

Was this review helpful to you?   Yes   No   Remove vote  
More Options

 | Add a comment