This is an excellent first chapter that uses Twine in a really elegant way. The story of an enhanced eugenics movement is told quite cleverly through bunking off school and exploring a county fair(Spoiler - click to show) (i.e. being the very delinquent that is called unfit).
My hope is the project hasn't been abandoned as this is such a great concept well executed.
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