Reviews by Sarah Mak
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CYBERQUEEN, by Porpentine
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CYBERQUEEN, August 30, 2022by Sarah Mak (Singapore)
I love the way this uses sentence fragments, which remind me of fast cutting in film. This makes the prose cinematic, and makes the pacing snappier.
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The Light in the Forest, by Emily Worm
The Light in the Forest, July 28, 2022by Sarah Mak (Singapore)
I like the quirky, Porpentine-like prose, and the cute romance between the protagonist and two side characters.
However, there are quite a few typos throughout this piece, and the ending is too sudden and understated for my liking. The worldbuilding hinted at a more fantastical climax, and there were no hints that the story was building up to a more low-key conclusion.
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