In terms of aesthetic and gameplay design, this game knows exactly what it is and what it's doing. The design and the art are very tasteful and suit the tone and gameplay well. I really enjoyed the gameplay, mostly light stat and dice elements that give texture to the story. I'd trust this author to push the stats and dice a little more, and I'd welcome a more complex, branching story in this vein. I'm glad LPP is working in this space; I'd be happy to see their games pop in regularly in fests and comps going forward.
The setting is so vibrant and lovingly made that it's a pleasure to just exist in the game space, murder notwithstanding. So beautifully textured and described, nary a "I don't see any such thing" in sight. I experienced some tension between what I thought the game was signaling I could/couldn't do and what was required for a few puzzles, but the overall package is so well-crafted that all is forgiven.
A fun concept well suited to its medium. There are a lot of fun moments, a clever use of narrator perspective, but it feels like a proof of concept more than a full game. I hope the author comes back to this concept for future works!
I really enjoyed this little game! It reminded me of my favorite kind of books as a young kid, the ones that really gave you a sense of what it was like to be another creature just living its life.