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About the StoryThe walls are high, the hole is deep. She is trapped, on a distant planet. Watched. She may not survive. But, she did live. Game Details
Language: English (en)
First Publication Date: October 2, 2016 Current Version: 1.0 License: Freeware Development System: Twine Forgiveness Rating: Merciful IFID: 49CD8ACA-6D4C-4D99-86B9-DEB674DABB67 TUID: 8rtmqg60oycxy3q5 |
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The Breakfast Review
I'm not sure how much of the text is just irrelevant data--maybe it's there for background, maybe it's there to build the mood, but there's too much of it, and anything relevant or important to the story gets lost in it. It doesn't help that most of the time, it looks like the hypertext links are either "click for exposition" or "click for the next page". Occasionally, we have a situation where one needs to hit certain links before the link to the next page is unlocked. It's a valid form of pacing, I suppose, but I think I'd lost enough patience that I couldn't get into it.
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